This is what me and my media partner created to show our pitch the class:
- We made this presentation for our pitch on Prezi.
- We addressed: the song itself (separately), test shots, the mood board, influences, references to research, health and safety, a target audience profile and theory incorporations.
Our song choice is:
Chris Eaton - Dare to Dream
We have also written to the artist for permission, and have received a very positive response.
The importance of creating a pitch was to essentially "sell" our music video idea to the rest of the class, in order to gain a response and constructive feedback from the audience, (this being through question sheets that the class filled in whilst watching our pitch be presented).
We did presented this pitch to the rest of the class because this is what industry music video directors do in the real world, and we need to take the same procedures as they would.
The feedback notes which we received from the class overall had a positive response.
A sample of comments on suitability for stated target audience.
(Most Significant) Positive Comments:
- "Highly suited for it's target audience. Good detail."
- "Audience was clear. Good audience profile."
- "It's suitable, they want the video to represent them."
- "Very clear target audience, good idea on who would listen to this genre of music."
(Most Significant) Negative Comments:
- "Target audience doesn't immediately strike as the kind of person who would even be interested in music videos - Not sure if there is an audience here."
- "I think the target audience they have chosen could maybe be for younger people."
- "Quite high age audience, video influences are quite young."
- "I think maybe the target audience needs to be at a lower age. The song just sounds too upbeat for a Christian/Private School teacher."
The general response here about our target audience is that, in a positive light, people thought our target audience was well suited for our music genre. However, in a critical light, the music video's target audience could be more directed towards a younger audience, because of a combination of the video influences and the upbeat-ness of the song.
A person commented on how the target audience we suggested might not even be interested in music videos, but this is justified by the majority of the other people's comments, stating that the music video should just be targeted at a younger audience.
A sample of comments on the originality of the idea.
(Most Significant) Positive Comments:
- ""Brilliant day to night theme."
- "I like how there is an upbeat side to the video, whilst having a meaning of unity."
- "Starts day and night, great idea having street atmosphere mixed with dancing."
- "It's different. I would really use glow sticks or a UV theme for this video but it's different and a good idea. I like the idea how it goes through day to night."
(Most Significant) Negative Comments:
- "Good mixture between redundant and entropic. Bits of it are typical "cheesy" but that's the effect they want."
The feedback we got from this section of the pitch presentation was outstanding. We did not got one completely negative comment. The class responded well to our glow stick and dance concepts for our music video. The only negative criticism we got was that some parts of our ideas are a bit "cheesy," but because that is aimed to attract our target audience, we need to keep that element.
A sample of comments on thoughts and logistical arrangements.
(Most significant) Positive Comments:
- "I think the shooting locations are practical, and the dancing idea is cool."
- "Clear health and safety plans."
- "Thought through and clear."
- "Filming in streets should be fine, and I think organization for this video is going to be the key."
(Most significant) Negative Comments:
- "Thought well about health and safety. Where will they get a huge group of people? Transport location?"
- "Trying to get a suitable piano and dancing location could be hard."
- "Filming on trains may take a lot of time, which will be difficult with other passengers around."
- "Could be difficult to film being in a public place.
The overall feedback that our class gave us for our given ideas on the logistical arrangements to make our music video practically, were that we had thought carefully about our health and safety arrangements, but we had not thought enough about the practicability of shooting in public places, such as trains and streets. Also, we have concluded that we need to think about the arrangements behind organizing a big group of people, and how we are going to get a piano which suits the genre of the music video (ie, classical).
Comments on the technical aspects of the idea - does it sound achievable with the college equipment?
(Most signifiant) Positive Comments:
- "Shown test shots so it is achievable with college equipment."
- "It does sound achieveable and exciting to do. I think the equipment will be fine."
- "Yeah I'm pretty sure the equipment will achieve what they want."
- "Yes as not many effects were mentioned, will come down to level of camera work as well."
(Most signifiant) Negative Comments:
- "Aside from the piano and dancing it seems fairly simple."
- "Sounds achievable, location filming may be difficult with busy streets."
- "It does seem achievable, but it may be hard to film in a very public place, like a city."
- "Sounds quite achievable, may be difficult to find a large group of people to perform the final scene."
The feedback on this section was very important, because it's made me take into consideration the way that I shall make sure that the filming is to a good, professional looking standard. The positive comments rounded to state how our project ultimately will be fine to film with college equipment; but the negative comments outline the difficulty in filming in public places (as mentioned above) and that it may be hard to film in busy streets with large groups of people.
Does the idea sound realistic? i.e. does it actually sound like an idea for music video/print work?
(Most significant) Positive Comments:
- "Yes, I was impressed by the examples they used so I can see it being a top class video."
- "It does sound like a good video, very suited to the song."
- "Sounds very realistic. Used research to show how it will look like a music video and with own ideas - Going through to day/night has a meaning."
- "Yes, can imagine bold colours, great dancers."
(Most significant) Negative Comments:
- "Yes, but again may be hard to use large groups of people. (With glow paints etc)."
- "It sounds like a lot of acting but very good achievable idea."
- "Reminds me of the T-Mobile adverts."
We had a really positive response to how realistic the music video sounded. The class said how the examples of the other music video's which influenced us, proved to them that our idea would work. They responded to our music video concept by saying that it sounded exciting and suited to the song/genre which we were using. The idea of bold colours, etc.. stood out as a significant importance to definitely involve in our video. There was not much negativity towards our video concept at all. We just have to be careful and be thorough in the organization of large groups of people being filmed; and the comment about the T-Mobile advert has directed me towards that for more inspiration.
Overall, does this idea sound exciting and achievable?
(Most significant) Positive Comments:
- "Yes deffo. It sounds exciting and something new, not the conventional dark and gloomy love songs that are out."
- "Yes sounds fun and will attract a lot of people."
- "The idea is very achievable due to good planning and preparation."
- "Yes, glow sticks and bright vibes."
(Most significant) Negative Comments:
- "It sounds interesting, slightly difficult to achieve to a professional standard but it is achievable."
- "Achievable but for me personally it doesn't excite me."
The feedback to the final section of our pitch, questioning if our music video idea sounds exciting and achievable had a tremendously positive response. Almost the entire class commented on how it sounded exciting etc, apart from two people who were worried about it being okay to film at a professional standard, and that it didn't excite another individual - but that might change once it is made. The positive comments generally highlighted the use of bright colours and glow sticks which we wish to use and make significant in the video, as well as the fact that the idea sounds like it would attract a lot of people (especially its target audience).
TARGETS:
- Coherent idea - visual, i.e. photography
- Theory is integral part in what we're doing